lisa creative writing

Thursday, May 03, 2007

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Walkin gworking one humid sticky summer afternoon. I needed a brake from my over dragged out working career. The thought that now I know that my i will only have 3 short months to live. The doctor said in his mellow tone voice "sorry sir but that cancer got the best of you, go home to your family and do everything you can." The story is going to be about some mans life but he finds out he only has a few months to live so go goes to his family and tries to do everything that he wanted to do in his life. While he is working he becomes weak and adventually dies.

Tuesday, May 01, 2007

"Opening the locked door"

Two couples lived together in an apartment. Each couple knew if there was a shirt hanging from the door handle that you shouldn't enter the room becuase it means you are going to see your friends getting busy. Well that day Suzy walked in the house early to find John was in her room in there bed getting busy with her other room. The lesson learned when the door is locked.

Monday, April 30, 2007

"She had been warned, but now it was too late."

A girl is warned of her abusive boyfriend not being a good guy. She is warned by everyone around her that he is not good and not to date him but she doesn't listen so now she is stuck with an asshole. the story will be of the struggle as she tries to excape him.

The phone call in the middle of night

The phone call in the middle of the night. i am going to write a story about a girl who in the middle of the night gets a phone call from her "other boy friend." while with current boyfriend. In the story its a typical boy goes physco.

Friday, April 27, 2007

The clever officer

the clever school police officer tripped over the body in the broom closet right before the science fair.

It was sunny day in Elms View county the morning of the biggest event of Elm Brook Middle School. The bluebirds sang a song outside officer Smith's window the blue birds feet gripped around the branch of the tiny tree that was planted only 3 years before. Officer Smith look straight forward in a gaze, day dreaming out his window of a day in paradise while eating his jelly filled powdered rasberry donut. He dreamed of placing his feet in the sand with a beer in his hand singing songs of "cheeseburgers in paradise." When the squeel of a young girl interupted his sizzling thoughts. The puggy faced fat girl noticed Officer Smith dazing at the little blue bird outside his window. When she was hit by a slice of pizza flying through air by that damn, Cockerin punk! The flying pizza slapped the puggy face girl right on her acne filled face only adding to the redness, she squeeled so loudly that it not only killed her day dream of the strong officer rescueing her from crime. The fat girls squeel interupted Officer Smiths paradise he created in his uneventful day dreams in the middle schools affairs.

Thursday, April 12, 2007

I want!!!!

I want to go to college drink a lot of beer but still be skinny and have a beautiful golden tan. I want to be very smart become a part of the deans list and be active in many outdoor clubs. I want to get married the following year after college to my high school sweet heart Dylan. I want my curly hair to be long at my wedding with all my family, neighbors, friends and coaches from my past there to celebrate with us. I want them to envy our relationship and wish they find somebody to make them as happy as we are, especially envy the rock on my finger that glimmers in the sunlight catching every ones attention and asking how much did it cost. But I wont know the price so I will blush sweetly and know then that I truly do love Dylan with my enormous diamond ring to show. Within a year I want to start my family being excited to learn if our new very first child will be a boy or girl. I want him to be a boy so the family name will continue; the next two years of raising the kid will fill my heart with joy. I want my mom and dad to live on my 150-acre lot out in the country with my husband’s parents too. I want my mom to visit everyday and my dad to play with the 3 other kids that will soon come after our strong baby boy. I want after my 4 kids to still be skinny and in shape, I want a fit body, perky boobs, sexy calves, and a cute booty. I want to know I can eat everything I desire but never gain a pound that will be a new invention. I want a fast truck lifted with pink diamonds on my rims, which will never be stolen. I want my truck to drive on anything I please through the water, up enormous rocks, and four-wheel a rock climbing contest. I want to drive next to my brothers in our matching crotch rocket motorcycles but smoke them because mine is faster, then remember I am 30 something and have children so I will slow down proud I pulled a wheelie for a mile. I want to go to work after my children are old enough to be in school all day, my job is going to pay me a lot of money and be awarding. I want at work to have my patients love my company and confide in my every action. On every Sunday I want to have BBQ with my entire family we will talk on the porch, fish, and watch TV together realizing that we are proud to be Americans. Richard and Danny will work together though they will smoke pot all day I want our family to accept that they are always bankrupt and married twin strange hick girls. I want to make Thanksgiving Dinner for the first time with my Mom and Mother in-law. I want my entire family on both sides to come to my home for every holiday and then have my Dad say, “ it seems like just yesterday she was running around, Lisa Pooh your so grown up.” I want my son to grow up and play football be the star of his Varsity football team. I want my daughter to have beautiful flowing golden curly hair with green eyes. She will be a sophomore on the varsity cheerleading squad, her brother will watch over her like a hawk making sure no boy messes with her. I want to be friends and a parent to my kids. I want my daughter to be 15 and to hear a noise in the middle of the night, grab a broom go to my daughters room afraid of a stranger. I want it to be the boy who she has dated the entire year starting to have sex with her, who broke her screen trying to get into my house. I want to break into her room hit him with the broom across the head scream for her father, him come in pissed of the scene. I want her to never want to have sex until marriage because every time it comes up she is reminded of me hitting the boy across his head in a rage, then telling her I thought it was a stranger. I want her to be embarrassed and ashamed. I want to go on a vacation and truly have fun with my family going to a place I have never been to. I want to see my kids graduate from college with good degrees and be proud like my mom will be towards me. I want to send my parents on their last good vacation together so they can cherish every moment as they age gracefully. I want to go to a hot vacation spot with my husband and drink until I am drunk and be the gross old couple all over each other, smiling knowing what I am doing. I want to get my hair hi lighted, botox, and work out everyday. I want to travel the world and have many picnics.

Wednesday, March 28, 2007

The Sewing shop

LISA BANKS: The Sewing shop crime
It was 1910 when our family moved from the parish in Limerick, Ireland. To the big city streets of New York City where the buildings like huge barriers stood at each bustling city street. We arrived early morning on the ship over many nights on the soaring ocean. My family was told it would be two weeks West across the Atlantic before we’d see Miss America herself standing proud and tall. Ma and Pa waited to come to America after Jim my Pa’s favorite brother came to this land a few years ago. With all the good words he has written in many letters about the new life he had given himself in America, Pa knew he wanted to make something of himself like his brother.

The air was salty when we arrived it reminded me of our home in Ireland but it was also so awful because everywhere I looked people stood. I had never seen so many people in my life in one area trying to escape Ellis Island into the new land. Surrounding my body pushing, screaming and crying, people tried to get through to get a glimpse of Lady Liberty. We were finally in America. I waited so long I dreamed for many nights of all the good things that I would see at my new home. It was everything and nothing of what I expected from all the things people had told me. America was bigger though it in the distance it was bigger than Ireland. I heard my Ma call out Maureen Reagan come, come now. So I went toward her so I wouldn’t disappoint her already my first step in America. She had all our belongings gathered in our trunk and luggage before the crowd came pushing for their things. All of the passengers went through the walkways off the crowded ship, which lead us to a man, who told my family to go to the examiner to get our eyes, ears, and body check. He spoke to everyone as if he was better than us. Very quickly and loudly like I didn’t understand the words that were coming out of his mouth. “ You little girl stand in that like quickly, you’re holding up the line.” I almost went off on him but Ma nudged me in my rib so I wouldn’t get kicked out of America because of my mouth the I would normally do if I was in Ireland.

As soon as my family got checked into Ellis Island and picked up by Uncle Jim he told Pa that he needed to get a job as well as my eight brothers and I. So I went out on the long streets of New York City the morning after we arrived looking for new life. Many people had lunches in their hands walking to work, school, and breakfast. They wore dresses pink, purple, and green flower prints with huge hats that Ma would say was unnecessary for the day. I called myself Maureen Reagan when introducing myself to all the business workers proud to be a Reagan and had made it to America. I remember looking for my new job it was hard to find somebody who didn’t make a comment about potatoes or tell me to I was ninny for coming to America and complaining I needed a job for support. But after many hours of walking up and down the streets like the lost child wild eyed and crazy, I saw a fun looking down town shop with my girls like myself working. Most of the girls had smiles on their faces talking with one another some dressed well while others dressed like I had that day. From what I could see through the huge windows that seemed to air the buildings it looked like a good place to find work. They were sewing dresses just like Ma does at night beside the warm fire after dinner before we all went off to bed all eight of us packed in one room like sardines. That memory of the bad points of Ireland clouded my mind reminding me why I came for a job in America. I knew I would be able to find work there because I had experience when watching and trying to help Ma with the many dresses she had made me over my 17 years of life. Walking into the doors I could smell the odor of women sweating and the fabric’s odor flowing through the factory. By this time I knew this is where my start would be in America. As I walked passed all the girls they snickered at me it was as if I had a sign on my back saying just arrived in America I have no job. They weren’t speaking in English it was all different languages. They boss was in his office towered above the women working behind a glass wall and balcony to look off of.
The boss a fat man, looked like an unpleasant version of Saint Nick. His thick beard moved when he spoke side by side his beard swayed. Inside of the building the air was warmer than I imagined since many of the windows were large and open. Walking through the open doors many girls smiled, enormous patterns for dresses laid out on many open tables in front of what seemed like hundreds of young girls. All I had to do was prove to him that I could sew a dress. I sat down next to a girl giggling at the pattern I was given. Though it was thick and hard to work with I manage. The fat man spoke to me within five minutes. He told me I got the job start today and be here first thing in the morning. My first days were lovely I was proud to be working like a good person does for himself or herself. Each day I came to work in a pleasant mood willing to sew any beautiful material into a dress that I rich white girl would buy to go to a fancy dinner with her family. Through out the months of working my money began to increase I finally earned money to buy myself what I needed then soon my wants came and I could pay for those things too. With the material I didn’t use I could sneak home some fabric if the boss wasn’t watching over us like a hawk. The dress I made myself was beautiful a deep rose color. The silk fabric lacing down my back and the matching hat I bought immediately made everyone who saw me in it tell me my eyes stood out and my skin look like a china doll when I wore my newly sewn dress. After a whole year of hard long labor we were given the opportunity to finally have a raise the fat man explained how we would have money to have apartments in the sky, nice clothes and maybe even a buy our lunch daily.
The day we were supposed to be given the raise it was stormy outside. Hell had come down the clouds were thick full of rain, lightning crashed down out of the dark clouds. Every girl came to work that day except me. I couldn’t make it out of my apartment the rain was too thick to see in front of my face. That day I knew I wouldn’t receive my raise if he realized I wasn’t at work. But the next morning the front page said. “ Yesterday the sewing shop girls were engulfed in flames… every girl died.” Shocked of news I wonder how in the storm the girls had been torched. Something was fishy about the entire news coverage. How we were supposed to have a raise but everyone died. Many years passed and I always wonder how that day all the girls during a rainstorm died. Other people in the town began to question as well as I the disturbing news of the sewing shop. It turned out that the sewing shop crime was planned so that the fat man wouldn’t have to pay for the work that the girls did for him.

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